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Vocab and Writing Style Rules (Canon Lock)

ZaroVerse must feel global, clear, and cinematic. Use simple words that translate well.

Rules

  • Prefer short words over fancy words
  • Avoid heavy science terms in dialogue
  • Let visuals carry meaning
  • Keep explanations minimal
  • Keep UI words short and repeatable
  • Examples

    Say ThisNot This
    "Ink""Mycelium"
    "Crack""Dimensional rupture"
    "Air bubble""Oxygen filtration field"
    "Power low""Energy deficit"

    ARC screens can be slightly more technical, but still simple and readable.

    Audience Scale

    A 10-year-old can follow the story through dialogue and core ideas. A 30-year-old finds the prose and systems engaging.

    Prose Register

    Narrative prose may operate at a higher register than dialogue. Primary reading level is 12+ (capable readers from age 10 can enter). Adult readers should feel respected, not talked down to.

    Think early Philip Pullman or Ursula K. Le Guin's Earthsea: complex sentences are allowed when they serve rhythm and atmosphere.